EMAIL: GENRE AND APPROPIACY

Hi! I[R1]  LIKE YOUR SITE ‘Save the whale’.

im[R2]  preparing for presentation at my school about why whales are  in danger of extinction (carita[R3] 

i[R4]  want u[R5]  to send me some stuff[R6]  about this, like brochures, posters etc!!!!!!!!!! [R7] I need it by tonite[R8] !!!!!![R9] 
CU[R10

E-mail: genre and appropriacy

Hi! I like your site “Save the Whale”

I’m preparing for a presentation at my school about why whales are in danger of extinction.

I want you to send me some information about this, like brochures, posters, etc! I need that information!

See you soon!

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 [R1]It does not appropriate to use capital letters

 [R2]The pronoun I write in capital letter .And the apostrophe is missing.

 [R3]It is not appropriate to use a face, because you don’t know the person.

 [R4]The pronoun I written en capital letter.

 [R5]Abbreviation the pronoun You

 [R6]It is not correct in this context. It could be information

 [R7]Exclamation marks

 [R8]The word is wrong written.

 [R9]Exclamation marks do not use in that way.

 [R10]Really informal message. You have to use for instance: Could you send it as soon as  possible, please?